Disregarding the analogy, there are problems with the doctrine itself. For example, here are two that stand out:
“Hell is a place where people are no longer in the presence of God” – how could this be if God is omnipresent?
In a similar vein, if Lucifer rebelled and Adam & Eve chose, and if God is omnipotent/omniscient/omnipresent, then it would mean that God chose to allow both events to occur. If that is the case then God chose to allow his own creation to be corrupted.