This is very well thought out. The language is very corporate-y, but it explains why the steps suggested are needed well. Well worth discussing implementing this framework in your own company.
This is perfect! I know the corporatese is a bit eye rolling but it gives a common language that someone who is not necessarily a software developer can grasp. It helps justify budget increases, explains threats, etc. It is harder than you would think to write in corporate talk and one of my biggest struggles is writing documents like this, so now I can just copy and paste this stuff without spending time thinking about it. Sometimes people get too technical and it is hard to translate it.